Please list 10 ways you can improve your essay scores
1.better quates 6.better voice
2better thiese 7better word choice
3.better vocab 8.longer paragrphs
4.better topics 9.better pie
5.better format 10.main point
Please write any 15 thoughts about the book Slaughterhouse-5. For each thought, please refer to a specific part of the book that generated this thought (for instance, “It was funny” receives no credit; “It was funny when he described the Tralfamadorians” receives full credit).
1.when he gose to tralfamador-makes the book have more of a si-fi feel
2.when he is in the war-makes it feel like a war novel
3.leaning about the 4th demtion-made me think about that topic
4.becomeing perionor on tralfador-made me wounder what it would be like
5.when he get capeued by nizzi-make me open my eys on the war
6.when he time travels-makes the book diffrent
7.when he is in a plane crash-makes it have a scary feel
8.when you know whats going to happen makes you want to read more
9.when he gets shot but the book still gose
10.when he meets up with old frends
11.when he gose to new your-makes himself diffrent
12.the bombing of dresdin-makes it a actoin book
13.when he laens from the tralfadors
14.when his wife dies and hes in the hospital
15.when he is heting shiped home -becuse he lived though the war.
State 5 possible themes for the book Slaughterhouse-5.
1.past,prensnt and futrue
2.deth is deth and life will go on
3.seeing life in a diffrent time.
4.leaning from another plant and bring it back to erath
5.being stuck in time
Write a conversation between yourself and Billy Pilgrim in which he tries to teach you a lesson based on his own experiences. You must explain IN DEPTH at least 3 specific events and details from the book in order to receive full credit. This conversation should go on as long as it takes to demonstrate YOUR UNDERSTANDING of Billy’s experiences.
EXAMPLE:
Billy: Hello, Mr. Cheng
Mr. Cheng: Hi Billy
Billy: Have you heard about Tralfamadore?
Mr. Cheng: No, what’s that?
Billy: It’s a planet where they... etc.
Me:what did you lean about life?
billy:that death is death and life will go on.
me:did montana wildhack have the baby?
bill:yes. she did and she now lives on tralfador permatley
me:did you wish the war never happend?
billy:i have mixed thougths about the war. there are some good and bad thing, but life will go on
